I think the detail you give in the resume breakdown is actually really unique and smart.  It's a great way to talk more about the experiences on your resume you're most proud of while explaining how the experience would help you in the future!  Really great!

I like how you elaborated on your experience and skills next to your resume.  It's there for anyone who wants to get a better sense of your background, which will be valuable when you're looking for jobs.

The breakdown of your experiences was a good idea. It helps further your qualifications in your field.

I loved the break down of all of your experience! I would have never thought to do that. It gives me a better idea of who you are personally as well as professionally. Great job!